A new chapter

I posted a new chapter to my original sci-fi story, The Space Between the Stars.

I hope you enjoy it!

The Space Between the Stars By: osricpearl
Despite growing in separate parts of the country, orphans Artie and Laz shared a connection that neither could explain - a mysterious power that set them apart. Along with their explosive friend Hash and the silent but blunt Modi, they go on an adventure to discover the source of their powers the secret behind their birth.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 7
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On the Doctor and Belated Things.

I got into Dr. Who about a year ago, during a time when I had completely written off this blog because I simply didn't have the time.

I started with the very first episode of the NuWHO and never looked back.

The Ninth Doctor, played by Christopher Eccleston, was a little dramatic for my tastes, but otherwise entertaining. He was the one who got me interested in the show and I will always think fondly of him. I thought that that he had great chemistry with Rose and I didn't mind the romantic subtext. (I didn't think it worked as well with the Tenth).

I like to call him the Dramatic Doctor, because everything he said and did was done with such emphasis!

He was a good Doctor, and left too early.  One season, or series, is not enough.

The Tenth Doctor, played by David Tennant, was immediately likable. I think he will always be my doctor, despite the fact that I found him a little sanctimonious. His pontifications about  about the greatness of humanity, except when some naughty historical tidbit comes around, were a little eye-rolling as well. It was Fluff, just Fluff. But I couldn't help but like him because he just kicked so much butt. My favorite Tenth Doctor episode was Family of Blood. Martha, an underrated and great companion, IMO, really shone and we got to see the Tenth Doctor living as a mundane human. His romance with the teacher was sweet and a little understated, but with passion beneath the surface. (I didn't call him the Love Doctor for nothing!)

But what really made me love the episode was that it showcased just how scary the Doctor could be when he got angry. Piss him off enough, then all those talks about no guns and humanity and all that go out the window. He may not use a gun, but he will seal you up in a black hole, forever. Yes, you are dangerous underneath that Fluff, Doctor, and I will lap it up.

Another excellent one was Midnight. This time, we got to see the Doctor at his most vulnerable. All of his Fluff about learning about new creatures and not being judgmental gets thrown back at him as it is those ideals which make him vulnerable to the Midnight Entity's machinations. It's quite intriguing. It also displayed just how vulnerable the Doctor can be without his companion. Had Donna been there with him, she would have been able to defend him against the mob.

The Tenth Doctor's tenure also featured my favorite companions, Martha and Donna. I liked that Martha was able to walk away even though she really loved him. Donna was funny and crazy. She would sometimes scold the Doctor a little too much for my tastes, but it came across as maternal or sisterly, so it wasn't so bad.

The Eleventh Doctor, played by Matt Smith, was OK. Of all the New Doctors, he is my least favorite. I know that this isn't a popular opinion. He seems to have amassed a great number of fangirls. But in my opinion, as a Doctor he was just weak. The first thing that I didn't like is that he resembled the Tenth too much. We already had a young and handsome brown haired devil, why do we get another?

He was a little too childish and playful. I know a lot of people find him charming. I get to see memes with him saying, "I talk baby," or "Fezzes are Cool," but there wasn't much of a spark with me. I didn't know where he was going, to be honest. On the one hand, he seemed like a jerk ass, but on the other hand he really liked children. He didn't have the level of threat that the Tenth Doctor possessed, which made him even challenge the gods (as in the Waters of Mars), but he sure tried to project it. He almost always failed. He had a strong personality, but he was led by the noose by Amy.

One of the interesting things about him was the fact that he had a strong connection with children. All of his companions had something to do with childhood. Amy he found as a little girl, Clara was a nanny and teacher, and Rory was Amy's childhood friend. River Song he first met as a baby. Many of his adventures dealt with saving children from calamities. He spent his last years making children's toys in a village that looked straight out of a Victorian ideal. Speaking of Victorian ideals, A Christmas Carol, ranks as the best Dr. Who Christmas Special. Once again it is very child centric as it deals with the redemption of a man through the Doctor's friendship with his childhood self.

I called him the Children's Doctor for that reason.

I didn't like his two main companions: Amy and Clara. Amy was too brash; always scolding the doctor. She was a little slutty, and rough around the edges, which was in itself not a bad thing. It's when it was combined with her nearly shrewish behavior toward the Doctor that I couldn't stand it. I would have liked her if it weren't for that, in fact, I liked her more during the viewing than I did after. Clara was annoying from the beginning and she ranks as my least favorite companion.

Rory is my favorite male companion. His steadfast love and devotion, coupled with one of the best character developments of the show sold me forever. Perhaps the reason I disliked Amy so much is because I felt she was unworthy of him.

The War Doctor was a good departure from the youth of the previous incarnations. He was more serious, but that was to be expected. He's the only incarnation that we know of that did not call himself "the Doctor" but rather, the soldier. But, unlike the other Doctors, he didn't have a long tenure and he didn't have a companion. The Bad Wolf incarnation of Rose may count, but she was not a true companion. I liked him nonetheless.

And finally we get to the Twelfth Doctor, or the Thirteenth, depending on how its counted. But I think of him as the Twelfth. I like him because he is a bit fresh. He is a crotchety old man, thank you, and does not like humans. I found his "Go Away Humans," sign rather relatable, as that is what I wish I could post on my own door at times. I haven't watched the latest season with him, so I haven't quite made up  my mind. But from what I've seen, he is better than the eleventh but not quite as good as the tenth. I still didn't like Clara. In fact, I'm glad she's gone. Yes, I know she is (spoilers) dead, and that makes me only slightly sad.

So far, my rankings are as follows:

  1. 10th

  2. 12th

  3. 9th

  4. 11th

That's it for today.

~OP 
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Poem - Call me Cassandra

Call me Cassandra

Prophetess of Scorn

My beloveds cover their ears

With their hands

Don’t speak! Silent as you were!

Do not dare speak!

If the worlds burns

Then let us burn with it

My beloveds cover me with scorn

And shame me before their peers

Threaten to banish me

Seal my mouth with shame

Accuse me of their sins

Call me Cassandra

Prophetess of Scorn 
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Review: The Fallen Kings Cycle


                                 

The Fallen Kings Cycle is a series of two books written by Gaile Z Martin. The first is titled, Sworn, which sets up the

conflict and the second is Dread, which continues the story on to its resolution.

Before I begin the general review, I must mention that Fallen Kings is a sequel to a four part series, Chronicles of the Necromancer, which I haven't read.However, Fallen Kings, read well enough to stand alone, as the background of each of the characters is thoroughly explained and the events of the previous series are given a brief overview.

The genre is Fantasy. Although I wouldn't call them high fantasy in the tradition of Tolkien, but it is epic in scope and reminiscent of the Belgarion and Codex Alera. However, the word built by Martin differs sharply. There are no elves, dwarves, halflings, or living fauna. Instead, outside of humans the only magical creatures to be found are vampires, called vayash moru, and wearwolves, called vyrkin, who can switch forms at will. There are also ghosts and living gods, who play a very important role in the story.

The plot is simple enough. After a long struggle for the Crown (which is summarized in the beginning and detailed in the Chronicles), the new Summoner-King Martris Drayke and his bride Kiara (who is also the heir apparent of her own nation) must now rebuild a broken kingdom beset by war and famine. The other nations of the Five Winter Kingdoms, their neighboring countries and allies, are also facing various disasters. In that time of weakness, a mysterious nation from across the Northern Sea decides to take advantage of the situation and attack them all at once. They must band together and form alliances to beat back the aggressors and survive.

The pros: I liked the world she made. It was cohesive and real. The Winter Kingdoms are alive, with their own cultures and histories. Some of the history we get to learn about through the narrative, and spans thousands of years. The writing itself is sophisticated and to the point. It describes the world vividly without becoming labored in the narrative.

The cons: Some of the points of the plot seemed too thickly laid. There were certain conversations which went over points already covered by other people in the book several times. The entirety of the first book is spent going on about how something is coming but no one knows exactly what except that it is probably an attack from the North.  This particular plot point is rehashed at least three times, and it wasn't the only plot point that was repeated various times. I know that she had three countries with similar phenomena and people were trying to figure it out, but she could have cut the dialogue. After all, the reader already knows all of that and would like to move on with the story.

The villains were not unmasked until the middle of the second book. We never get to know them personally, or even a description, until the very last battle, and so the climax seems shallow. The enemy generals, one who is named, are never described. As a reader who likes a good villain, I found this deeply disappointing. Especially since the perspective was written in third person. Who commanded the fleet? Was the king or queen of the kingdom bullied by the Summoner into fighting, or was the Summoner hired by an ambitious monarch? We will never know.

And then there is the improbable fact that in a world where ghosts are commonplace and where mediums are hired as prostitutes, that zombies would be a bridge too far. I'm sorry, we know we can talk to grandma but her corpse walking? Now that's completely out of the question.

But besides those minor quibbles, I found the books very entertaining. If the library ever has the Chronicles available, I will definitely been picking them up.

4 out of 5 x's

~OP

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Feng Shen Ji is Boss

Feng Shen Ji: The Boss of Manhua

Ever want to read a manhua/manga that was unapologetically macho? Tired of the power of friendship? Tired of the pretty boys, the glasses girls, and the generic stupid, spiky haired hero?

If you answered yes to those questions, then I have the manhua (Chinese Comic) for you.



This manhua is so awesome, it blows nearly everything else out of the water in unapologetic testosterone fueled furry and over the top theatrics. Big dudes aren't afraid to be big dudes. Even pretty boys kick some ass. And when it is time to unfurl a special move, call it a gloriously long name and make it a full page splash.



Oh, and did I mention it was in color?

Plot? OH yes, plot...I was so entranced by its awesomeness that I forgot about plots.

The story revolves around a young, spoiled prince (Wu Geng) whose world is turned upside down one day when his father dies in a futile battle with the gods and his mother self-immolates herself (and his body) in an elaborate funeral pyre. Lucky for him, his mother turns out to be a god as well, making him a demigod. She may have killed his body in a fire, but gifts his soul short term autonomy allowing his soul to switch bodies, saving him. He chooses the body of another boy, (Ah Gou) recently killed but otherwise intact. Provided with a new name and face, the gods believe that he died in the fire along with his mother. Believing their victory over the rebellious immortal and her mortal husband are complete, the gods forget him.

Wu Geng, in his new body, picks up a fiancee (Bai Cai - who was betrothed to Ah Gou) along with it and they both are sold into slavery, doomed to mine until they die. But he does not give up. There, he meets some friends, a renegade god, and a few villains that become important later on. He also becomes increasingly bad ass, so when he finally is able to meet the gods to get his revenge, he triumphs (at least initially).

He is also very selfish and craven and likes doing things on his own. He does have spiky hair though.



I suppose the hair can't be helped.

But his story doesn't end there, which is fortunate for us who enjoy a good drag down, beat up manhua in all its glory. The wiki is here for those who want more details. Since it's not been picked up for publication in the US, one can go to any scanlation site and read it without feeling an ounce of guilt. But, if it is ever licensed this one of those series that is definitely worth the buy!

littl3x gives this manhua
XXXXX out of 5.

The Space Between the Stars - Original SciFi

I am in the process of writing a story, The Space Between the Stars.

The first three chapters have been posted up on Fictionpress and can ben found here:
https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3238554/1/The-Space-Between-the-Stars

The synopsis:
Despite growing in separate parts of the country, orphans Artie and Laz shared a connection that neither could explain - a mysterious power that set them apart. Along with their explosive friend Hash and the silent but blunt Modi, they go on an adventure to discover the source of their powers the secret behind their birth.

Rated "T" for language, mild violence, and adult themes.

The story was conceived about ten years ago, but due to my lack of experience and motivation,  it never took off. I don't expect this to be a classic, and I have no illusions of getting it published (self or otherwise), as it is still a "practice" story. Most authors write a great deal that never sees the light of day.

However, the creative process cannot be stopped, and I wish to share my first long forey into original fiction to receive constructive critisism and improve my craft.

I hope you enjoy it,

~OP

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A Tale of Two Cities - Thoughts

Originally posted by littl3x at A Tale of Two Cities - Thoughts
There are some books that stay with you long after they've been read, like a delicious meal savored hours after its been savored and its plates washed. The feelings and ideas invoked in the story linger on long after they've been fully digested by the mind. A Tale of Two Cities, by Charles Dickens is such a book.

Despite the fact that it has many Dickensian elements that are quite easy to spot, such as contrived coincidences, the book has a great deal more depth and nuance than any of his other works.

First of all, the characters are not completely one dimensional walking ideals. The true hero of the story, Sydney Carton, is an anti-hero, who doesn't realize his true potential until the end. The villain of the story, Madame Defarge, is also a somewhat sympathetic creature. She was made the ruthless tigress, as she is described, by circumstances.

This is a little different from some of the other, earlier tales, in which characters were either totally good, to exemplify everything that is good in the world, or utterly corrupt, to exemplify that which is evil. I don't fault him for this. It was a literary device that he used at the time in order to explore issues of the age, but it is refreshing to see something a little different.

Second of all, the themes he uses of duality and redemption are multifaceted. Charles Darney was willing to redeem the sins of his fathers, despite the fact that he was not responsible for them. This noble act of redemption, which meant facing the guillotine, was foiled by Sydney Carton, who died in Darney's place. This act served a dual redemptive quality. In it, not only did he redeem himself, but also the name of a family he had absolutely no connection to.

Some have likened his act of redemption to Jesus, but I think that there is a problem with that analogy because he was not just dying for the sake of another, but also for the sake of himself. It is an imperfect allegory. This was done purposely to humanize the redemptive act. In short, the final famous phrase has more impact because it he is it is done by someone who is so fallen, that losing his life is his only salvation.

Dickens is, despite his revulsion for the baser acts of the revolution, sympathetic to it and it shows. One of my favorite scenes is when Dr. Manette's testimony, written during his time at Bastille, is read. In it, he gives an account of the events that led him to be falsely imprisoned in the first place. The description of the treatment of the serfs is pretty bleak, and surprisingly explicit considering the time period in which it was written. But, my favorite line in the whole book can be found in it, as Dr. Manette leans over to treat a young man who is mortally wounded.

The young boy tells Manette, "We common dogs are proud too, sometimes."

It contains some powerful imagery and interesting characters. His wordy, overly descriptive Victorian style, which is sometimes a hindrance, works very well giving us a sense of the period through language. The dialogue was impressively handled, nuanced and consistent with the individual's characterization. Darney, for example, is properly reserved and aristocratic, despite his humility, while Carton is properly roguish and snide.

This isn't a real review, because I am not qualified enough for such a task. But I hope that my thoughts on the subject will encourage someone to pick up the book and read it. It really does deserves the title as one of the great English classics, but that has already been determined by those much greater than I.

~OP
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How not to ruin a character: Naruto edition

One of my favorite characters in Naruto became Sakura because I liked that she was flawed but was trying to better herself. This is a bit of fresh air when it comes to heroines, who are oftentimes portrayed as nearly perfect but with a few quirks.
However, I have to admit that the way that Kishimoto has treated her has made it difficult for me to continue to like her now that the series is about done.

This should also be titled, "What not to do with romance."

So, on to my rant.

  1. If Sakura is supposed to be the main character's romantic interest, which she has been since the first chapter, then why is she portrayed constantly fawning over some guy who doesn't care about her?

  2. If Sakura is supposed to grow throughout the series, why is she still pining for a guy who doesn't care about her and has treated her like garbage throughout the series?

  3. Why did he have to write the fake confession? That is one of the most character and pairing damaging scenes I have ever read. The scene made her appear callous and conniving I noticed that there was a sharp increase in Sakura hate after that and NaruHina love. Is there any question why? The same scene could have been done if she had spoken to him in private instead of in front of everyone, and without a fake confession.

  4. Why, only four chapters ago, did Sakura have to cry and beg Sasuke not to go using almost the exact same wording she used at the end of part 1.

  5. If she is supposed to end up with Naruto, why have her confess her love once again right before the series ends?!

  6. If she is supposed to end up with Sasuke, why did she end up getting rejected so nastily? Why has there been no real indication that Sasuke loves her back? There have been no flashbacks of any kind that imply that he cares about her more than Kakashi, i.e. an extension of his new familial ties.


The whole thing has just been completely bungled starting with the fake confession on. I am still confident that the end pairings will be NaruSaku/SasuKarin, but it's not been a good ride. If I am right, it will just be an empty "victory" for me. It will not even be a victory, but rather just an indication that I know how to read through a narrative, no matter how badly it may be.

Although other elements of the story remain pretty good, and I am glad to have started the series and I will miss it now that it is over, overall Sakura's character has been demolished. Kishi has taught me what not to do with a character or romantic subplot. It has been an very instructive lesson indeed.

~OP 
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